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Reyansh (smirking): "Acha sune ek chiz notice ki maine…"
Sameer: "Kyaa?"
Reyansh: "Jis trail room se tu nikala, ussi trail room se Ritika kaise aayi?"
Sameer (in mind – nervous): Lag gayi waat… "Voo m..m..mujhe kya pata…"
Reyansh (teasing): "Kahin tum dono saath main toh nahi the waha?"
Sameer (stammering): "K..k..kyaa… kuch bhi b..bolra tu!"
Reyansh: "Pasina kyu aa raha itna?"
Sameer (wiping forehead): "V..vo.. garmi bahut ho rahi na."
Just then Reet joins.
Reet: "Ritika dress pasand aayi teko?"
Ritika: "Nahi yaar… meko dusri hona."
Reet (noticing): "Aree ye dono fir yaha…"
Reyansh (smiling): "Reet… hello."
Reet: "Haa… acha ho gayi shopping?"
Reyansh: "Nahi bas ho rahi hai."
Reet: "Ha…"
Reyansh (teasing): "Aree Ritika, aapko bhi pasina aa raha hai? Itni garmi ho rahi kya tum dono ko?"
Reet: "Mujhe toh nahi ho rahi garmi."
Reyansh (cheeky): "But aapko dekh ke mujhe hone lagi."
Reet (shocked): "Acha?!"
Reyansh (smiling): "Ji!"
Reet (annoyed): "Muh pe chappal marungi!"
Reyansh (hands up): "Aap toh serious ho gyi… main mazak kar raha tha!"
Reet (warning tone): "Kisi din iss mazak ki aadat mein bahut pitoge."
Reyansh (still smiling): "Acha suno na…"
Reet: "Bhoko!"
Reyansh: "Tumne kuch notice kiya?"
Reet: "Kya?"
Reyansh: "Tumhari behen bhi ussi trial room se bahar aayi jaha se mera bhai nikala abhi."
Reet (rolling eyes): "Tum trail pe na nazar rak rahe the kya?"
Reyansh (defensive): "Chi chi main aisa waisa nahi hu!"
Reet (teasing): "Fir kaisa waisa ho?"
Reyansh (dramatic pose): "Bahut jyada smart aur handsome."
Reet (laughing): "Galtfemi… wow."
Reyansh: "Sach keh raha hu… ladkiyan marti hai dekh ke."
Reet (sarcastic): "Kyu? Itni gandi shakal hai ki ladki seedha mar jati?"
Meanwhile, Sameer keeps staring at Ritika.
Ritika (angrily): "Gur kya rahe ho… aankh nikal dungi!"
Sameer (puppy face): "Kabhi toh rahem karo 😭"
Ritika (folding arms): "Achaaa 🙄"
Sameer: "Ek toh help karo, fir bhi mujhe hi suna rahi ho."
Ritika: "Maine bola tha help ke liye?"
Sameer (dramatic): "Yee Reyansh mere ko goli maar de re!"
Reyansh (laughing): "Aree bhaiya, itni kya jaldi hai marne ki? Abhi meri shaadi dekh ke marna na!"
Reet (teasing): "Kaisa hai ye… uska bhai marna chahta hai, help karne ke bajaye ise bol raha."
Ritika (joking): "Aree Reyansh, tum gala daba do tumhare bhai ki wish puri kar do."
Reyansh (saluting): "Jo hukum!"
Sameer (shocked): "Saaleee… meri hone wali biwi shaadi ke pehle vidhwa ho jayegi!"
Reyansh: "Kabhi bolta maar de, kabhi hone wali biwi ki yaad aati… bhai, mansik santulan sahi hai na?"
Reet (laughing): "Jiske paas tumhare jaisa bhai hoga, bhala vo kaise theek ho sakta!"
Sameer (emotional): "Thank you… kisi ne toh kaha!"
Reyansh: "Ab tumhari behen mein chamunda mata aa jaati hai… maine kabhi kaha ghar se bahar mat lao!"
Ritika (fuming): "Yee Reet pakad mujhe… isse pehle iska sar nariyal ke tarah fod du!"
Outside the mall, a group of terrorists are trying to escape police chase.
Gunda 1: "Boss, police abhi bhi piche hai… kya kare?"
Boss: "Humhe kaise bhi karke unse bachna hoga. Chalo mall ke andar… bheed hai, police humhe waha dhoond nahi payegi."
Gunda 2: "Yes boss."
They rush into the mall. Panic spreads everywhere.
Meanwhile, Ritika is searching for the washroom.
Ritika (confused): "Ab ye washroom kaha hoga…"
She bumps into the Boss, and accidentally drops his gun.
Ritika (scared): "I am really sorry!"
Gunda 1 (angry): "Dekh ke chal nahi sakti?!"
But the Boss freezes… his heart skips a beat. Background song in his mind: "Pehla Nasha, Pehla Khumar…"
Gunda 2 (confused): "Boss ko kya hua?"
Ritika (stammering seeing gun): "Ye… ye… g..unn hai?!"
Gunda 1 (sarcastic): "Haan toh?"
Ritika: "Sachi wali gun hai?!"
Gunda 2 (mocking): "Nahi, isme tikliya dal ke fodte hai!"
Ritika (innocent): "Ohhh… ek bar mujhe bhi try karna hai!"
Gunda 2: "Abeyy… kya ladki hai pagal!"
Ritika (pleading): "Aree please… bachpan mein khela tha iske saath… ab bahut saal ho gaye!"
Gunda 1 (looking at Boss): "Boss, ye ladki gun maang rahi hai!"
Boss (softly): "De do fir…"
Gunda 2 (shocked): "Yee boss pagal ho gaya hai!"
Ritika (smiling): "Hayee… kitna acha boss hai tumhara! Aur tum dekho…"
Boss again goes into filmy trance… Background song: "Aur tumse mile dil mein utha dard karaara…"
But as Ritika takes the gun, it suddenly fires. A bullet goes off. Chaos spreads—everyone screams and runs. Ritika, terrified, runs away holding the gun.
Gunda 1 (panicking): "Aree vo toh gun leke bhag gayi!!!"
Gunda 2: "Boss, hosh mein aayiye!"
Boss (lost in trance): "Kyaaa hai itna tez kyu bol raha hai…"
Gunda 1: "Boss, ladki gun leke bhag gayi!"
Boss: "Bhalla gun kaise ladki leke bhag sakti?"
Gunda 2 (facepalm): "Boss… matlab tha, ladki gun leke bhag gayi!"
Boss (angry now): "Dhoondo usko!"
The mall is in total panic. People are screaming, running, hiding behind shops as gunshots echo. Ritika, still shivering with the gun in her hand, keeps running without direction.
Suddenly she slips and falls. The gun slides a few feet away. Two goons rush and corner her.
Gunda 1 (pointing gun): "Toh akhir mil gayi!"
Gunda 2: "Ab bata, gun kaha hai?!"
Ritika (stammering): "V..v.. mujhe nahi pata!"
Reet, hiding nearby, notices the gun lying under a bench. Ritika in panic throws it away without realizing.
Gunda 1 (furious): "Dekh, ye natak mat kar! Seedhe se gun wapas kar warna yahi goli mar dunga!"
Ritika (folding arms, fake bravery): "Acha… mar ke dikha!"
Other side, Sameer and Reyansh are searching frantically.
Sameer (panicked): "Thank god hum bach gaye… ek min! Ritika kaha hai?!"
Reyansh (realizing): "Aree haa! Vo dikh nahi rahi!"
Reet (worried): "Vo toh piche thi na…"
Sameer (freaking out): "Piche thi toh ab kaha hai?! Kahin un logo ne pakad toh nahi liya usse?!"
Sameer (yelling): "No… no… oh god… Ritikaaaa!!!"
They rush back.
Meanwhile, the Boss enters the scene.
Gunda 1 (to Ritika, ready to shoot): "Abhi tujhe thikane lagata hoon!"
But suddenly the Boss slaps his own man.
Boss (angrily): "Yeee! Teri himmat kaise hui isse darane ki?!"
Ritika looks at him in shock.
Ritika (in mind): Ye kaisa boss hai…
Gunda 2 (complaining): "But boss, ye ladki gun leke bhagi aur ab kehri hai gun kaha hai pata nahi…"
Boss (calmly): "Toh humare paas vo ek hi gun hai kya?!"
At that moment, Sameer, Reyansh, and Reet arrive breathless.
Boss (turning to Ritika, soft tone): "Aap theek toh hai na?"
Ritika (still shaken, but nods): "Haa… vaise in dono mein aap hi ek samajhdar lagte hai."
The Boss’s heart melts completely. Background song in his head: “Tumse hi din hota hai… tumse hi shaam aati…”
Boss (nervously smiling): "Ji… thank you… aur main humesha aapko khush rakhunga."
Ritika (shocked): "Kyaa?! Y..y..yeh bol rahe hai aap?!"
Boss (blushing, filmy style): "A… aap mujhe pasand hai."
Reyansh almost chokes.
Reyansh (to Sameer, whispering): "Sameer, ye toh teri wali ke sath flirt kar raha hai!"
Sameer (clenching fists): "Main isse chodunga nahi!"
Reet (suspicious): "Ye… tum dono kya fuspusa rahe ho?"
Reyansh (covering up): "K..kuch nahi!"
Goons are also stunned.
Gunda 2 (murmurs): "Lagta hai boss ka dil aa gaya iss ladki pe."
Gunda 1 (nodding): "Haan…"
Ritika snaps out of shock and scolds the Boss.
Ritika (hands on waist): "Oyeee… teko acha kya kaha, tu toh hawa mein udne laga!"
Boss (seriously): "Nahi… main toh zameen pe hoon."
Ritika (facepalms): "Mera na dimaag mat kharab kar, samjha na!"
Sameer steps in, fuming.
Sameer (protective): "Ritikaaa!"
Ritika (relieved in mind): Thank god ye bandar aa gaya! "A…a.. Sameer, tum aa gaye!"
Sameer (in mind, panicking): Ab ye kya karne wali hai?
Ritika (pointing at Boss): "Dekho! Ye gunda badmaash mujhse flirt kar raha hai… dekho!"
Sameer (furious): "Acha! Ye flirt karega?! Issa ghooma ke marunga na… tujhe nani-parnani yaad aa jayegi!"
Boss (pulling out gun, angry): "Ye chircut mujhe dhamki dega?! Ye saari goliya teri bethi mein ghusa dunga!"
Ritika (scolding Boss like a teacher): "Ye… tum jante nahi ho! Ye na bahut tedi cheez hai… issa marega na, toh tumhari shakal pehchaan mein nahi aayegi!"
Sameer (in mind, sweating): Ye… ye mujhe marwayegi!
The Boss aims gun at Sameer. But just in time, Reet and Reyansh throw a saree over his head. The gang panics.
Reyansh (yelling): "Bhaago!"
They all run, dragging Ritika away. Police sirens roar outside. Officers shout through megaphones:
Police: "Dekho! Sidhe se bahar aa jao tum sab!"
The terrorists retaliate with gunfire. A dead body of a security guard is dragged outside by them, raising the tension even higher.
The group hides behind a shop shutter, breathing heavily. Sameer holds Ritika’s hand tightly, not letting go. Reyansh keeps cracking jokes to lighten the mood while Reet tries to calm Ritika down. But in the Boss’s mind, one thing is clear—he has fallen for Ritika.
Terrorists: (chillate hue) “Sab ke sab neeche baith jao! Koi hila toh goli se uda dunga!”
Sab darr ke maare neeche baith gaye. Ritika, Reet, Reyansh aur Sameer bhi bheed mein baith gaye.
(Heavy footsteps… A boss type terrorist enters, wearing black clothes, looking completely dangerous. AK-47 in hand, only anger in his eyes.)
Boss: (cold tone)
"Mujhe yha police se bachne ke liye chhupna tha… par mujhe toh ek aur cheez mil gayi… yaadgar."
(His eyes fixate on Ritika. Ritika panics. Reet holds her hand protectively.)
Boss: (Moving forward, he raises his gun and points it at Ritika)
"Tum… haan tum. Ab tum meri banogi. Samjhi? Ab tum sirf meri ho."
Ritika: (In a mix of anger and fear, in bold tones)
"Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?! Mujhe haath lagane ki koshish bhi mat karna!"
Ritika: “Door raho mujhse! Tum jaise gande insaan ke saath main kabhi nahi jaungi!”
Boss: (Raising my voice, in a cool voice)
“Tumhe lagta hai tum mujhe mana sakti ho? Ab tum meri ho… aur main jo chahta hoon vo le leta hoon.”
Sameer: (in his mind )
“Agar ek second bhi deri ho gayi toh main apna sab expose karke iska kaam tamaam kar dunga.”
(At that very moment the sound of a loudspeaker is heard from outside.)
Police Officer (in loudspeaker ):
“Terrorists! Tum charo taraf se gher liye gaye ho. Hathiyaar neeche daal do aur samarpan kar do!”
(The boss's face changes, a little angry and a little shocked. He grips the gun tightly..)
Boss: (yelled)
“Koi bhi andhar aaya toh sabko goli maar dunga! Samjhe tum sab?!”
(Boss comes closer to Ritika, as if to use her as a shield and challenge the police.)
Boss: (tries to put the gun on Ritika's shoulder)
“Agar police aayi toh sabse pehle tum jaogi.”
(Ritika's eyes look into his with fear, but there's a boldness inside. Just then, the police suddenly throw smoke bombs inside. Smoke spreads. There's a slight rush among the people.)
Sameer: (He immediately pulls Ritika behind him)
"Ritika, neeche ho jao!"
(A police commando team rushes in. They quickly apprehend two or three terrorists. Boss tries to escape, dragging Ritika away, but Sameer blocks his path.)
Sameer: (angry tone)
“Chhod Ritika ko! Ab tera game khatam hai.”
(The boss is about to fire, but commando snipers shoot him in the hand. The gun falls. The police pin him down and apprehend him.)
Boss: (screaming, angrily)
“Tum sabko main chhodunga nahi!”
(The police drag him away. Everyone breathes a sigh of relief. Reet hugs Ritika. Ritika breaks down in tears, shaken. Sameer comes close to her and speaks softly.)
(Ritika looks at him, gratitude and a strange comfort in her eyes. Sameer immediately lowers his gaze, concealing his feelings.)
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